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a bet between love life death and darkness

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Hurry mother your daughter is calling

the angel you created is slowly falling


The tearful child knows her mother is sleeping

yet compassion for the women can not stop the weeping




Hurry goddess your whole life is quickly breaking

just one word from the devil made its mind start quaking


The life you have guided is softly fading

stuck in the ocean and for years has been wading




Quick now mother your daughter is dying

poisoned by her emotions when she was in bed lying


The suffocating girl can't raise her voice to call

so her departure in the morning will be a surprise to all




Quick now goddess you life is needing your attention

too terrified by the darkness to remember what was mentioned


The cowering life only wishes to run away

yet a promise from it's goddess convinces it to stay




My apologies dear mother, your daughter is but a shell

she could never scream loud enough without notifying hell


The hollow girl could only cry out silently at night

for evil had already taken it's toll on her life at light




My apologies dear goddess, your life has feel stolen way

it waited for you assistance to arrive all day


The trusting life waited for your promise to come true

your life spent ages weeping for you




Now sweet mother and goddess your entirety is gone

All because you were sleeping too deep for too long


That little girl and the life in the morning will be full grown again

But sadly do to the damage there is no way to mend




So my goddess, my mother, everyday you'll have to look and see

the pain I survive everyday because you forgot me



Sorry begging mother the heart of that goddess is dead

time cannot heal the wounds of words that have never been said





Hurry goddess make a mother's wish come true

Try to swallow your anger and let the mother start new



Stop now my goddess envy will turn you green

its time now to swallow your anger and start clean






But the goddess now as dark as the one who took out her light

she'll never see that the life continues to fight


Now the mother enraged creates  an opening for death to come and take it's stand

and in that last moment the devil himself shows his winning hand
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silverdoomofparis's avatar
Awesome !! Very nice artcraft.
I hope nevertheless ur inspiration doesn't come from ur own life ^^